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 Post subject: Zorgie likes drawing
PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:27 pm 
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Hi making art threads is what cool kids do lately isn't it

K so I draw sometimes even though I'm horrible at this
I made this so I could upload stuff in one place and HOPEFULLY PEOPLE WILL GIVE ME ADVICE ON SOME THINGS I DO TERRIBLY WRONG ;A;


I can only draw on paper and take photos of drawings so don't mind the terrible quality k


I will put drawings in urls so people who don't want their eyes to melt don't have to risk it everytime they enter this place

For starters, I just drew Azami and wanted to share so yuh

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HOW DO I HANDS help

...OOPS I FORGOT TO ERASE ALL GUIDELINES this happens often 'cause I'm too laze to do it and/or I forget

Criticism pls

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:40 pm 
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ok no.
It';s good first of all seeing as how you don't draw super often. You need to make the hands bigger, legs bigger/longer (legs are usually 1.5~2 times the size of the torso). The legs have good shape though, like, rly good. The face is good but her neck should be slightly visible at the sides of her chin. The shoes are actually p good i can't help there because I can't shoe, feet need to be bigger. The upper arms need to be a little thicker (or at least the sleeves), the lower arm is good.

OVERALL It looks good tho even if I don't know who the ffff the character is /ROLLS OFF

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:44 pm 
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I try to draw at least once a day but...
...but
but yeah
doesn't always happen

Thaaaanks <3
LOL I SWEAR THE NECK WAS THERE
I FORGOT TO REDRAW IT AFTER ERASED SOME THINGS......OTL

Thanks for the tips, I'll keep in mind~

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:46 pm 
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Lol I do that a lot. I erase guidelines and forget to draw things like ears and fingers then I scan it and I'm like WTF WHERE DID IT I GO......

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
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Guess I can also post a drawing from like...month ago or so? maybe a bit more

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This is Davina

Yes I tried drawing forum peoples

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also Zorgie, comparing that one to your new Azami drawing (which looks awesome btw) I am seeing a lot of improvement in proportions and such. I can't contribute anything that Takkun has already

You're better at hands then some people lmfao

At least you attempt instead of always hiding them

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
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Thanks thanks~<3

Yeah, I'm trying to draw full bodies each time so all body parts are practiced each time I draw xDD

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
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Hmmmmmmmmm
Zorg
Tou HAVE A LOOOOOOOT of years waiting u to shine

Not sayin its bad BUT
u need to work on body your face is ur good point < FUCK YEA LIKE ME LOVE U ZORG!
But the head shape is bad i mean u do it like i circle it have to be curved and has some cheeks also long corcle for the 4head and up

The hands is good u just need to do them in real life
Also the legs....
Your bad point i cant tell cuz its just so short u know nd the feet supah swag xd jk ;3

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I will try to help ya u know i said it but u never go to msn tho so i might post sone tut from time to another if i had time

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
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Lol her head shape is supposed to be...not long xD
Also tried to show that she is not tall (140cm iirc) but OOPS ACCIDENTALLY ONLY MADE SHORT LEGS

Thaaanks for feedback <3

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 Post subject: Re: Zorgie likes drawing
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You have great potential, Zorgs. :3

I can't exactly add much more to what Takoto said. But, as advice from someone is bored very often, practice makes perfect. The more you practice it, the better you get at it. You'll understand it better. And never be afraid to try new things and new challenges with your drawing, cuz that stuff usually teaches you how to draw new things and then you feel super awesome as your skeelz improve.

BTW your hands are much better than some other people I've seen. But I can't really give much advice that help you improve right away on the hands. It takes a long time to get used to how hands look and how they move and twist and bend and whatnot. The only thing I can give as advice for now is that the best example for drawing hands is your own hands. Use your hands as a reference when you're trying to draw it. :3 I hope I helped :3

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