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My attempt at a mini series
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hutchicken
Joined: Wed Aug 19, 2009 4:48 pm Posts: 6264 Location: Quebec, Canada
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 Re: My attempt at a mini series
Kirby1112 wrote: I didn't really know how to describe Bang's rush combo thing. Thought I should make Bang do really well, as to not insult his fans with the fact that he was "just a test." I'm sure there were some other reasons behind it.
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Kirby1112
Joined: Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:14 am Posts: 5767 Location: I... don't know.
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I may think he's kind of... you know but I am completely indifferent towards his play style, so whether he does well or not does not matter to me. Besides, can you blame me? 
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Kirby1112
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I've been really lazy lately. This'll be up whenever. D:
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juggernaut121
Joined: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:53 am Posts: 1886
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Kirby1112 wrote: I've been really lazy lately. This'll be up whenever. D: ok then, not like it's your job or anything (btw nice new avatar)
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| Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:20 am |
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Kirby1112
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I know isn't he awesome. :3 The anime itself, is kind of meh, way too much fluff. But when it gets to the action it's okay.
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juggernaut121
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its a guy? anyway what anime is it from?
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Kirby1112
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Shugo Chara, possibly one of the girliest animes evaaaaaaar. But has really memorable and awesome characters. 
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Kirby1112
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The wait wasn't really worth it, but I've been extremely lazy lately.
Chapter 3 - The Beauty and the Beast. "You did well on your last mission," Rachel stated, it was rare to hear a compliment from her. "Do you remember Litchi Faye Ling? The one who stopped you in the last mission," she said. "I've run into her a couple'a times, actually," Ragna says. He pretty much knows everyone in Kagutsuchi, of real importance, anyway. "You know Arakune?" Rachel asks. "Ara-what now?" Ragna asks. Rachel stares at him, "Arakune, you know, the disgusting black ball of filth," she says. Rachel openly despised anything dirty. "That thing has a name?" Ragna asks. He seemed startled. Ignoring Ragna's question Rachel continued, "They are both in the same place at the moment, it's under Kagutsuchi, very near to the Kaka clan's village." "I know the place," Ragna says. He holds his hand up and walks toward the area where he did last time. The same teleportation process happened again, and Rachel sat down to enjoy some tea. "I hope he hasn't underestimated the two." Ragna appeared right in the middle of their battle. "You have some really bad timing, rabbit," he thought to himself. Litchi thrusted her staff at Arakune and Arakune bent to avoid it. After recovering he leaped at Litchi screaming some bizarre phrase. She jumped to avoid and threw her staff downward. Arakune was hit by it and fell to the ground, screaming in pain. After awhile Ragna had to interrupt, he hated sappy fights. He walked up behind Arakune and forcefully kicked him aside. He preferred one on one battles. "You!?" Litchi screamed. Of course she recognized him, she's met him quite a few times. Completely ignoring her question Ragna dashed at her, fist outward and screamed "Hell's fang." She dashed backwards, but was hit by the follow-up. Arakune awakened and jumped at Ragna. Ragna was hit from behind and fell to the ground. Arakune sucked him in and spat him upward. Litchi threw her staff at Ragna and he hit a wall. "No fair," he thought. He carnage scissored in their direction to split them up. Litchi got hit and was sent flying but Arakune bent to avoid it. Ragna attempted to restrict Arakune's movements. But he had no legs to cripple, he was never on the ground long enough, and he could bend anyway he wanted. When he attempted to use Gauntlet Hades he missed, but Arakune was hit by Litchi's staff. "Oops," Litchi muttered to herself. She dashed at Ragna, and when Ragna attempted to Hell's Fang her, Litchi screamed "Limie Gaeshae" (spell? I have checked her move list recently to know,) and threw her staff upward. Ragna was sent flying, then pinned to the ground when the staff fell. Arakune appeared behind Litchi and ingested her, to spit her out in the opposite direction. "Bi c " he muttered under his breath. Arakune jumped high and spat out a cloud. It surrounded him, making him hard to approach. "This is really starting to piss me off!" screamed Ragna. "Blood Kain!" He ran to Arakune and swung his sword. Arakune bent to avoid it but Ragna quickly recovered from his move and grabbed Arakune. He thrusted him upward and Arakune was devoured by some strange red substance. He fell to the ground, screaming in pain. Ragna ran at Litchi, but she jumped back. "Is that all you're going to do!? Run!?" screamed Ragna. He was obviously getting angry. "No," said Litchi "All Green!" She screamed and a wave of flames appeared and hit Ragna. He was sent flying and swore quietly to himself when he hit a wall. "What are you waiting for!?" screamed a voice in his head. When Litchi approached to attempt to finish it Ragna grabbed her and defeated her the same way he defeated Arakune. He disappeared. "Took you long enough," said Rachel upon his arrival. "Let's see you do a better job!" screamed Ragna. Rachel put down her tea and prepared to tell Ragna about his next mission.
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Chain Revolver
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Joined: Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:00 pm Posts: 2631 Location: Georgia
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Pretty good there Kirby. Nice job. 
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Kirby1112
Joined: Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:14 am Posts: 5767 Location: I... don't know.
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OH CRAP. I totally forgot this thing existed. D:
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