All times are UTC [ DST ]




Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 86 posts ]  Go to page Previous  1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 ... 9  Next
Author Message
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 2:15 pm 
Offline
Chief of the Beautiful Red Head Tactical Strike Force
User avatar

Joined: Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:00 am
Posts: 7700
Location: BRTSF Headquarters
Gender: Male
Main: Tsubaki Yayoi
Sub: Rachel Alucard
XBL: SoaringZero
PSN: SoaringZero
Well I figured it wasn't fair to post up a character of mine without first commenting on yours so here it goes.

First off, I just want to say that I love the amount of detail that you put into him. Not just the descriptions of his normals and everything which is great too, but his backstory and personality. You really have a well fleshed out and very, very interesting sounding character here man. I like the fighting style too. I can kinda see where the inspiration came from for it but I like how you added your own touch to it. As far as BB mechanics go though(which gets you plus points with me lol) he sounds really good. Reminds me in some ways of Ragna but....I wanna say more inventive.

I'll wait until you get more up before I comment anymore on the moves, but from what you have so far, well done Luca. Well done.

_________________
Image
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3342162/ - Check out my amateur writing lol


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:44 pm 
Offline
Registered User
User avatar

Joined: Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:53 pm
Posts: 611
Main: Platinum the Trinity
Jeez, I just read through the entire moveset description, and wow Luca, you are very very thorough with this project. I didn't understand a lot of terms and stuff you put on here, but I definitely got more than the basic gist of it. Right now, moveset-wise, he seems pretty good. A lot of his normals seem to have average to speedy animation/frame-thingies, so I'm wondering if you're intending on having him be easy to learn. I have yet to see his D drive or any of his Specials, so I can't really say much more in specific. Your Normals are pretty good. Also, will intend on having Dark with better aerial moves or ground moves? :U

And again, seriously, kudos to you. Your attention to detail for this is just really outstanding. :3

_________________
~Vienna-chan~
HERP takin' a break from fighters until new fighters come out XD
Waitin' on GGSign and SSB4~


Quote:
"Azrael's astral is proof that he does in fact, lift."


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:33 am 
Offline
Ragna Monitor
User avatar

Joined: Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:33 pm
Posts: 8834
Location: Ware Wa Kurenai No Wyvern!
Gender: Male
Main: Ragna the Bloodedge
Sub: Bang Shishigami
XBL: Scruffbang
PSN: scruffbang
Thanks a lot, you two. Really helps to hear that, it motivates me.




Sorry for not updating in a while, i have been busy with a lot of things. Dont think i am not working on this, however, and i will update FOR SURE tomorow, promise.



....While i'm on it, i want to ask you guys to give some suggestions of possible specials\supers. I have been having a REALLY hard time thinking of stuff. There is no need for frame data, just ideas for possible special attacks.



Of course, if no one has any ideas then it's fine, i can still do this by myself. It will simply take much longer, but meh.

_________________
Image




Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:59 pm 
Offline
Registered Active Coolkid
User avatar

Joined: Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:14 am
Posts: 9278
Gender: Other
Main: Litchi Faye-Ling
Sub: Mu-12
XBL: FecesMonster
PSN: DatAnus
I feel like digging up my old OC Fighters and posting them here.

U:

_________________
Image
★Don't tell anyone, but I'm actually a Velociraptor★


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:27 pm 
Offline
Registered User
User avatar

Joined: Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:53 pm
Posts: 611
Main: Platinum the Trinity
Welp, Shadow will be your drive, so I can only imagine the (Supers, definitely, and some) Specials will have him as part of the attack. But have you considered any specific cool sword attacks? Like the stuff that Jin or Baiken can do?

And will the attacks that involve Shadow will always include the exact same weapon that Shadow creates for Dark or not?

_________________
~Vienna-chan~
HERP takin' a break from fighters until new fighters come out XD
Waitin' on GGSign and SSB4~


Quote:
"Azrael's astral is proof that he does in fact, lift."


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:36 pm 
Offline
Registered Active Coolkid
User avatar

Joined: Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:57 pm
Posts: 5476
Location: On airship, hanging out with my bitches and whores
Gender: Male
Main: Hazama
XBL: Nizama
PSN: Bad analog layout
I guess in super, Dark and Shadow could do some sort of cool special attack.
You know, big blast or some sort of multi hit rush attack shit.

_________________
Image
I am Lord Knight! The one who brings justice upon my enemies!
Image

P4A Main: Akihiko
GG Main/Sub: Johnny/Sol
BB Main: Hazama


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:38 pm 
Offline
Ragna Monitor
User avatar

Joined: Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:33 pm
Posts: 8834
Location: Ware Wa Kurenai No Wyvern!
Gender: Male
Main: Ragna the Bloodedge
Sub: Bang Shishigami
XBL: Scruffbang
PSN: scruffbang
Cutey Honey 97 wrote:
Welp, Shadow will be your drive, so I can only imagine the (Supers, definitely, and some) Specials will have him as part of the attack. But have you considered any specific cool sword attacks? Like the stuff that Jin or Baiken can do?

And will the attacks that involve Shadow will always include the exact same weapon that Shadow creates for Dark or not?




Yes i have considered Sword attacks. The only special i have in mind so far is one of those, in fact. I want to update this ASAP but i just CANT come up with a 6D and J.D and i dont want to update it with the drive incomplete(only got 2D and 5D).



I will update this thread today for sure though.



Nizama wrote:
I guess in super, Dark and Shadow could do some sort of cool special attack.
You know, big blast or some sort of multi hit rush attack shit.



Something like Daifunka? I dont know. Trying to stay away from copying other attacks too much, but i'm gonna consider that.

_________________
Image




Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:09 am 
Offline
Chief of the Beautiful Red Head Tactical Strike Force
User avatar

Joined: Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:00 am
Posts: 7700
Location: BRTSF Headquarters
Gender: Male
Main: Tsubaki Yayoi
Sub: Rachel Alucard
XBL: SoaringZero
PSN: SoaringZero
Well for a 6D, what about a two hitting attack with Dark and Shadow?

_________________
Image
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3342162/ - Check out my amateur writing lol


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:42 am 
Offline
Ragna Monitor
User avatar

Joined: Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:33 pm
Posts: 8834
Location: Ware Wa Kurenai No Wyvern!
Gender: Male
Main: Ragna the Bloodedge
Sub: Bang Shishigami
XBL: Scruffbang
PSN: scruffbang
Chain Revolver wrote:
Well for a 6D, what about a two hitting attack with Dark and Shadow?



A bit late there Chain. Just updated the OP with drive attacks and the first special, which is also the only one i can think of. Thanks for the suggestion though, might end up being useful in the future for a special idea or something.




So yeah folks. Normals and Drives are all there. I think there is enough info to work with so that you guys can start giving well thought suggestions on how i should continue this.



Remember: If you think there is something wrong, dont be afraid to say it. Any feedback is good and helps me to see another point of view.

_________________
Image




Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 1:53 pm 
Offline
Chief of the Beautiful Red Head Tactical Strike Force
User avatar

Joined: Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:00 am
Posts: 7700
Location: BRTSF Headquarters
Gender: Male
Main: Tsubaki Yayoi
Sub: Rachel Alucard
XBL: SoaringZero
PSN: SoaringZero
Ah ok. But nice moves so far. Just read through them. I really like the one where he bitch slaps them with his scarf. Classic. The drive attacks sound awesome. I can kinda picture this character having very stylish looking combos.

Now I want to propose an idea. I know people really enjoy this type of thing, so I was thinking of making a place for it in the arts section of the forum. That way if more people wanted to do this(like me lol) we wouldn't have to worry about it getting lost in the misc section. Something like a subsection for Original Characters or something like that? Sound good?

_________________
Image
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3342162/ - Check out my amateur writing lol


Top
 Profile  
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 86 posts ]  Go to page Previous  1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 ... 9  Next

All times are UTC [ DST ]


Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum

Search for:
Jump to:  
Powered by phpBB ® Forum Software © phpBB Group | DVGFX2 by: Matt